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雅思写作:混淆类饼图 耗能与温室气体的排放

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本文摘要:本题出自剑10Test1,书中并未提供考官范文。我翻看了不少网络“范文”,发现它们中的大多数是有误导作用的。主要体现在task achievement和coherence and cohesion两项上犯的错误。 劝告大家不要轻信网络范文,也希望无良小机构的低能老师们别再坑人了。

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本题出自剑10Test1,书中并未提供考官范文。我翻看了不少网络“范文”,发现它们中的大多数是有误导作用的。主要体现在task achievement和coherence and cohesion两项上犯的错误。

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劝告大家不要轻信网络范文,也希望无良小机构的低能老师们别再坑人了。题目如下:You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevantWrite at least 150 words.【一】Introduction我还是会快速完成开头段的写作,详细如下:The first pie chart illustrates the energy consumption in an ordinary* family in Australia. The second pie chart gives information about the corresponding* greenhouse gas emissions due to the use of energy. * 题目中的average此处翻译成“平均的”,因此我给到的替换词是ordinary* corresponding: 相对应的【二】Overview 读题是一定要掌握住上下两张饼图之间的因果关系,题目中有提到“resullt from”。我们把因果关系详细化,会获得以下四种差别的情况:消耗大 排放大:water heating消耗小 排放小:cooling消耗大 排放小:heating消耗小 排放大:other appliances/ refrigeration/ lighting 在把四种情况分类:耗能和排放正相关:1和2耗能和排放负相关:3和4其实,举行到这个环节,我们就已经能够得来全文总结了,即消耗了几多能源和导致了几多温室气体的排放是没啥关系的。

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详细如下:To sum up, it can be immediately observed that the amount of energy consumed is irrelevant to* the greenhouse gas emissions resulting from the energy use. * be irrelevant to: 与...无关【三】Paragraph 3&4 凭据上述分析得来的“正相关”和“负相关”两类情况,我们就可以分出paraphraph 3和4。详细如下:In some cases, how much energy is consumed is positively correlated to* the corresponding emissions. In more detail, water heating is the second most energy-consuming**, with 30% of energy used for this purpose. It contributes to*** the severest emissions(32%). In contrast, cooling is both the most energy-saving**** and environmentally friendly*****. * be positively correlated to: 与... 正相关** energy-consuming: adj. 耗能的*** contribute to: 此处译为“导致”**** energy-saving: adj. 节能的***** environmentally friendly: 情况友好型的On the other hand, there are other cases where* energy consumption and the emissions are disproportionate**. Specifically, the proportion of energy used for heating is the largest, at 42%, but this energy use only causes 15% of the emissions. However, the use of other appliances poses a great threat to*** the atmosphere(28%), in spite of its insignificant consumption. Similarly, lighting and refrigeration are also less energy-consuming but disproportionately air-damaged****.* where: 定从,= in which,而which指代了other cases** disproportionately: adj. 不相称的*** pose a threat to: 对...造成威胁**** air-damaged: adj. 污染大气的【四】完整的Model AnswerThe first pie chart illustrates the energy consumption in an ordinary family in Australia. The second pie chart gives information about the corresponding greenhouse gas emissions due to the use of energy. To sum up, it can be immediately observed that the amount of energy consumed is irrelevant to the greenhouse gas emissions resulting from the energy use. In some cases, how much energy is consumed is positively correlated to the corresponding emissions. In more detail, water heating is the second most energy-consuming, with 30% of energy used for the purpose. It contributes to the severest emissions(32%). In contrast, cooling is both the most energy-saving and environmentally friendly. On the other hand, there are other case where energy consumption and the emissions are disproportionate. Specifically, the proportion of energy used for heating is the largest, at 42%, but this energy use only causes 15% of the emissions. However, the use of other appliances poses a great threat to the atmosphere(28%), in spite of its insignificant consumption. Similarly, lighting and refrigeration are also less energy-consuming but disproportionately air-damaged.183 words。


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